Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dots-requirements-16

Request Review of draft-ietf-dots-requirements
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 22)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2018-11-09
Requested 2018-10-26
Authors Andrew Mortensen, Tirumaleswar Reddy.K, Robert Moskowitz
Draft last updated 2018-11-19
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -16 by Brian Weis (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -16 by Scott Bradner (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -16 by Joseph Touch (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -16 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -18 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Brian Weis
State Completed
Review review-ietf-dots-requirements-16-secdir-lc-weis-2018-11-19
Reviewed rev. 16 (document currently at 22)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2018-11-19


I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

This document specifies requirements for DOTS servers, clients, and the sessions setup between them. Many of the requirements are addressing security within the architecture.  When reading the requirements I became concerned with impersonation attacks, and I so I was glad to find that much of the Security Considerations section addresses the possibilities of those attacks. The only suggestion I have is to highlight the sentence  suggesting how to determine these attacks  ("To detect misuse, ....")  so that it is more prominent, for example by creating a separate paragraph. 

I believe the document is Ready to publish.