Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-19
review-ietf-dots-telemetry-19-tsvart-lc-scharf-2022-01-23-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dots-telemetry
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 25)
Type Last Call Review
Team Transport Area Review Team (tsvart)
Deadline 2022-01-24
Requested 2022-01-10
Authors Mohamed Boucadair , Tirumaleswar Reddy.K , Ehud Doron, Meiling Chen , Jon Shallow
I-D last updated 2022-01-23
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Early review of -09 by Jan Lindblad (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -10 by Nagendra Kumar Nainar (diff)
Yangdoctors Last Call review of -14 by Jan Lindblad (diff)
Artart Last Call review of -19 by James Gruessing (diff)
Intdir Last Call review of -19 by Ted Lemon (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -19 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -19 by Michael Scharf (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Michael Scharf
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-dots-telemetry by Transport Area Review Team Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/tsv-art/xGeHLDzhhc3yJpwDs3PKYIB3dcQ
Reviewed revision 19 (document currently at 25)
Result Ready
Completed 2022-01-23
review-ietf-dots-telemetry-19-tsvart-lc-scharf-2022-01-23-00
This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's
ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written
primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's
authors and WG to allow them to address any issues raised and also to the IETF
discussion list for information.

When done at the time of IETF Last Call, the authors should consider this
review as part of the last-call comments they receive. Please always CC
tsv-art@ietf.org if you reply to or forward this review.

I have reviewed this document as TSV-ART reviewer. All in all, it is a
well-written document, albeit with a somewhat atypical usage of YANG. 

I have only reviewed the document regarding typical TSV-ART issues.
As far as I can see, the document does not contain any major problem
related to Internet transport protocols.