Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-08
review-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-08-genart-lc-bryant-2022-01-20-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2022-01-25
Requested 2022-01-11
Authors Christian Huitema , Sara Dickinson , Allison Mankin
I-D last updated 2022-01-20
Completed reviews Tsvart Last Call review of -08 by Brian Trammell (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -08 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Phillip Hallam-Baker (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Stewart Bryant
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/knoZG7fEYMwRxN7B5Q5o8YhPcbw
Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 12)
Result Ready
Completed 2022-01-20
review-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-08-genart-lc-bryant-2022-01-20-00
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Document: draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-08
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2022-01-20
IETF LC End Date: 2022-01-25
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: A well written document ready for publication. It has couple of very
tiny nits that could usefully be addressed.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
ALPN is not well known and should be expanded on first use. It would be useful
to note that “doq” is a string. This is clarified below, but it is proposed
that that text be removed.