Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dprive-padding-policy-04
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Request Review of draft-ietf-dprive-padding-policy
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-04-04
Requested 2018-03-21
Authors Alexander Mayrhofer
I-D last updated 2018-04-26
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Charlie Kaufman (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Joe Clarke (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -04 by Magnus Westerlund (diff)
Tsvart Telechat review of -05 by Magnus Westerlund (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-dprive-padding-policy by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 04 (document currently at 06)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2018-04-26
review-ietf-dprive-padding-policy-04-genart-lc-shirazipour-2018-04-26-00
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Document: draft-ietf-dprive-padding-policy-04
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2018-04-03
IETF LC End Date: 2018-04-04
IESG Telechat date: NA

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Experimental RFC but I have
comments.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
[Page 3], Section 3 nits:
"(eg. "---->"(e.g. "
"signifcantly"---->"significantly"
"octects"---->"octets"

[Page 5], Section 4.4 nits:
"transction"---->"transaction"

[Page 5], Section 5 nits:
"octects."---->"octets."

Best Regards,
Meral
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Ericsson
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