Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-03
review-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-03-genart-lc-shirazipour-2019-12-04-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 09) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2019-12-02 | |
Requested | 2019-11-18 | |
Authors | Tim Wicinski | |
I-D last updated | 2019-12-04 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -03
by Meral Shirazipour
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Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Stephen Farrell (diff) Tsvart Last Call review of -03 by Brian Trammell (diff) Intdir Telechat review of -04 by Jean-Michel Combes (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/RQyIwUyCT9jM2vUrQYqALUOOIwI | |
Reviewed revision | 03 (document currently at 09) | |
Result | Ready w/issues | |
Completed | 2019-12-04 |
review-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-03-genart-lc-shirazipour-2019-12-04-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-03 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2019-12-02 IETF LC End Date: 2019-12-02 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC with some issues (I would recommend taking into consideration the comments received on the mailing list) Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: It would have been interesting to have this draft also mention the additional/potential risks for non-web applications. IoT was briefly mentioned in Section 3.6. What about other applications? Is there any other privacy risks beyond just identifying the content being requested? Very interesting topic. Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com