Last Call Review of draft-ietf-drip-arch-22
review-ietf-drip-arch-22-genart-lc-even-2022-04-05-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-drip-arch
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 31)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2022-04-06
Requested 2022-03-23
Authors Stuart W. Card , Adam Wiethuechter , Robert Moskowitz , Shuai Zhao , Andrei Gurtov
I-D last updated 2023-07-17 (Latest revision 2023-03-06)
Completed reviews Secdir IETF Last Call review of -22 by Valery Smyslov (diff)
Iotdir IETF Last Call review of -22 by Thomas Fossati (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -22 by Roni Even (diff)
Tsvart IETF Last Call review of -22 by Kyle Rose (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -24 by Dave Thaler (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -24 by Valery Smyslov (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-drip-arch by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/XoKw9aHWV0oIg0j9Rgzx0IyfhyQ
Reviewed revision 22 (document currently at 31)
Result Ready
Completed 2022-04-05
review-ietf-drip-arch-22-genart-lc-even-2022-04-05-00
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Document: draft-ietf-drip-arch-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2022-04-05
IETF LC End Date: 2022-04-06
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as an informational RFC

One question: I noticed that the document relates to RFC9153 requirements. I
did not see gen-7 and gen-10 addressed .   Gen-7 QoS: DRIP MUST enable
policy-based specification of performance and reliability parameters.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

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