Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dtn-bpsec-12
review-ietf-dtn-bpsec-12-genart-lc-evens-2019-10-02-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dtn-bpsec
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 22)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-10-03
Requested 2019-09-19
Authors Edward Birrane, Kenneth McKeever
Draft last updated 2019-10-02
Completed reviews Secdir Early review of -06 by Dan Harkins (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -12 by Tim Evens (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -13 by Dan Harkins (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tim Evens
State Completed
Review review-ietf-dtn-bpsec-12-genart-lc-evens-2019-10-02
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/DXh41NdGhVzzZgD6p39lm9fRzJ8
Reviewed rev. 12 (document currently at 22)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2019-10-02

Review
review-ietf-dtn-bpsec-12-genart-lc-evens-2019-10-02

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Document: draft-ietf-dtn-bpsec-12
Reviewer: Tim Evens
Review Date: 2019-10-02
IETF LC End Date: 2019-10-03
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

Under section 1.4, BPA is referenced in bullet 1 and 2 but is first defined in bullet 4.  Suggest defining that in bullet 1.

On page 10:

* "never used to sign the cipher- text provided" has an extra space between cipher- and text. 

* "The BCB is decrypted by security- aware nodes in the" has an extra space between security- and aware.