Telechat Review of draft-ietf-dtn-ipn-update-11
review-ietf-dtn-ipn-update-11-genart-telechat-housley-2024-06-12-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dtn-ipn-update
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2024-06-18
Requested 2024-06-09
Authors Rick Taylor , Edward J. Birrane
I-D last updated 2025-05-23 (Latest revision 2024-09-27)
Completed reviews Artart Telechat review of -11 by Marco Tiloca (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -09 by Russ Housley (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -11 by Jean-Michel Combes (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Russ Housley (diff)
Artart IETF Last Call review of -09 by Marco Tiloca (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -09 by Tim Wicinski (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Russ Housley
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-dtn-ipn-update by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/juHW-YYZ1lesibNd0gDxRvFE0HY
Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 14)
Result Not ready
Completed 2024-06-12
review-ietf-dtn-ipn-update-11-genart-telechat-housley-2024-06-12-00
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Document: draft-ietf-dtn-ipn-update-11
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2024-06-12
IETF LC End Date: Already complete
IESG Telechat date: 2024-06-20


Summary: Not Ready


Major Concerns:

RFC 7116 is an Informational RFC, and this document, if approved, will
be published an an RFC on the standards track.  It is very unusual for
a standards-track RFC to update an Informational RFC.  I suggest that
this document and a companion document ought to obsolete RFC 7116, where
the companion document separately handles all of the non-ipn topics in
RFC 7116.  The companion document can be an informational RFC.


Minor Concerns:

None


Nits:

Section 5.5: s/security source EID for/security source for/