Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ecrit-unauthenticated-access-07
review-ietf-ecrit-unauthenticated-access-07-genart-lc-melnikov-2013-10-16-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-ecrit-unauthenticated-access |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 10) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2013-09-27 | |
| Requested | 2013-09-19 | |
| Authors | Henning Schulzrinne , Stephen McCann , Gabor Bajko , Hannes Tschofenig , Dirk Kroeselberg | |
| Draft last updated | 2013-10-16 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -07
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Alexey Melnikov
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Genart Telechat review of -08 by Alexey Melnikov (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Tina Tsou (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -08 by Tina Tsou (diff) Opsdir Telechat review of -08 by Dan Romascanu (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Alexey Melnikov |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-ecrit-unauthenticated-access-07-genart-lc-melnikov-2013-10-16
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| Reviewed revision | 07 (document currently at 10) | |
| Result | Ready with Nits | |
| Completed | 2013-10-16 |
review-ietf-ecrit-unauthenticated-access-07-genart-lc-melnikov-2013-10-16-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ecrit-unauthenticated-access-07.txt Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov Review Date: 3 October 2013 IETF LC End Date: 27 September 2013 IESG Telechat date: N/A Summary: Ready with nits Major issues: None Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: In Section 1: the acronym VSP is not defined. (It is defined in a later section.) In Section 6.1: EAP has no reference. In Section 5.2: EAP-TLS needs an Informative reference.