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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ecrit-unauthenticated-access-07
review-ietf-ecrit-unauthenticated-access-07-genart-lc-melnikov-2013-10-16-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ecrit-unauthenticated-access
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-09-27
Requested 2013-09-19
Authors Henning Schulzrinne , Stephen McCann , Gabor Bajko , Hannes Tschofenig , Dirk Kroeselberg
Draft last updated 2013-10-16
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -07 by Alexey Melnikov (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -08 by Alexey Melnikov (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Tina Tsou (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -08 by Tina Tsou (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -08 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Alexey Melnikov
State Completed
Review review-ietf-ecrit-unauthenticated-access-07-genart-lc-melnikov-2013-10-16
Reviewed revision 07 (document currently at 10)
Result Ready with Nits
Completed 2013-10-16
review-ietf-ecrit-unauthenticated-access-07-genart-lc-melnikov-2013-10-16-00
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Document: draft-ietf-ecrit-unauthenticated-access-07.txt
Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
Review Date: 3 October 2013
IETF LC End Date: 27 September 2013
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary: Ready with nits

Major issues: None

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:



In Section 1: the acronym VSP is not defined. (It is defined in a later 


section.)




In Section 6.1: EAP has no reference.

In Section 5.2: EAP-TLS needs an Informative reference.