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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-emailcore-rfc5322bis-11
review-ietf-emailcore-rfc5322bis-11-opsdir-lc-jiang-2024-04-28-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-emailcore-rfc5322bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2024-04-29
Requested 2024-04-15
Authors Pete Resnick
I-D last updated 2024-04-28
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -11 by Thomas Fossati
Opsdir Last Call review of -11 by Sheng Jiang
Artart Last Call review of -11 by Joseph Yee
Assignment Reviewer Sheng Jiang
State Completed
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Reviewed revision 11
Result Has nits
Completed 2024-04-28
review-ietf-emailcore-rfc5322bis-11-opsdir-lc-jiang-2024-04-28-00
Reviewer: Sheng Jiang
Review result: Has Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-emailcore-rfc5322bis
Reviewer: Sheng Jiang
Review Date: 2024-04-29

This Standards Track document replaces RFC5322, specifies the Internet Message
Format (IMF), a syntax for text messages that are sent between computer users,
within the framework of "electronic mail" messages. This document is
well-written. It is almost ready for publication from the INT area perspective.
A couple of Nits is listed below:

It is not needed to list RFC2822 & RFC822, the historic documents far before
RFC5322. The history can be tracked just from the mentioning of RFC5322.

The quoting format is not following the normal RFC setting. The format of
requiring language boilerplate is also containing errors.

It is recommended to replace quoting label, such as BCP14, STD13, STD18, by
normal RFC +number.