Last Call Review of draft-ietf-eman-energy-aware-mib-15
review-ietf-eman-energy-aware-mib-15-genart-lc-gurbani-2014-06-23-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-eman-energy-aware-mib |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 17) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2014-06-30 | |
Requested | 2014-06-19 | |
Authors | John Parello , Benoît Claise , Mouli Chandramouli | |
I-D last updated | 2014-06-23 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -15
by Vijay K. Gurbani
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -15 by Stephen Kent (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Vijay K. Gurbani |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-eman-energy-aware-mib by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 15 (document currently at 17) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2014-06-23 |
review-ietf-eman-energy-aware-mib-15-genart-lc-gurbani-2014-06-23-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-eman-energy-aware-mib-15 Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: Jun-23-2014 IETF LC End Date: Jun-30-2014 IESG Telechat date: Not known. This document is ready as a Proposed Standard. A couple of nits can be fixed; more information below. Major: 0 Minor: 0 Nits: 2 Nits - S4, third paragraph: s/and secondly on identification, context/on identification, and context/ - S5.4, third paragraph: spacing appears to be off since the relation- ships appear distended to the left, beyond the margin. Thanks, - vijay -- Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent 1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60563 (USA) Email: vkg@{bell-labs.com,acm.org} / vijay.gurbani at alcatel-lucent.com Web: http://ect.bell-labs.com/who/vkg/ | Calendar: http://goo.gl/x3Ogq