Last Call Review of draft-ietf-eman-energy-aware-mib-15
review-ietf-eman-energy-aware-mib-15-genart-lc-gurbani-2014-06-23-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-eman-energy-aware-mib
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-06-30
Requested 2014-06-19
Draft last updated 2014-06-23
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -15 by Vijay Gurbani (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -15 by Stephen Kent (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Vijay Gurbani
State Completed
Review review-ietf-eman-energy-aware-mib-15-genart-lc-gurbani-2014-06-23
Reviewed rev. 15 (document currently at 17)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2014-06-23

Review
review-ietf-eman-energy-aware-mib-15-genart-lc-gurbani-2014-06-23

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Document: draft-ietf-eman-energy-aware-mib-15
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Jun-23-2014
IETF LC End Date: Jun-30-2014
IESG Telechat date: Not known.

This document is ready as a Proposed Standard.

A couple of nits can be fixed; more information below.

Major: 0
Minor: 0
Nits: 2

Nits

- S4, third paragraph:
 s/and secondly on identification, context/on identification, and
 context/

- S5.4, third paragraph: spacing appears to be off since the relation-
 ships appear distended to the left, beyond the margin.

Thanks,

- vijay
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Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent
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Email: vkg@{bell-labs.com,acm.org} / vijay.gurbani at alcatel-lucent.com
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