Last Call Review of draft-ietf-emu-eap-noob-04
review-ietf-emu-eap-noob-04-genart-lc-schinazi-2021-05-14-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-emu-eap-noob
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2021-04-13
Requested 2021-03-30
Authors Tuomas Aura , Mohit Sethi , Aleksi Peltonen
I-D last updated 2021-05-14
Completed reviews Iotdir Early review of -01 by Dave Thaler (diff)
Secdir Early review of -01 by Steve Hanna (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by David Schinazi (diff)
Assignment Reviewer David Schinazi
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-emu-eap-noob by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/_sgbEUua8b2l9pTRpl5tZiTj7dk
Reviewed revision 04 (document currently at 06)
Result Ready
Completed 2021-05-14
review-ietf-emu-eap-noob-04-genart-lc-schinazi-2021-05-14-00
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Document: draft-ietf-emu-eap-noob-04
Reviewer: David Schinazi
Review Date: 2021-05-14
IETF LC End Date: 2021-04-13
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Well-written document.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: In s5.6 "AAA administrators may need to recognize the name" isn't
clear to me. If this document mentions that administrators may need to
recognize the name, it should specify what actions the administrators need to
take.

Nits/editorial comments: None