Last Call Review of draft-ietf-eppext-tmch-smd-03
review-ietf-eppext-tmch-smd-03-opsdir-lc-wicinski-2015-12-04-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-eppext-tmch-smd |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 06) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2015-12-04 | |
| Requested | 2015-11-29 | |
| Authors | Gustavo Lozano Ibarra | |
| Draft last updated | 2015-12-04 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -03
by
Russ Housley
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -04 by Russ Housley (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Simon Josefsson (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Tim Wicinski (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Tim Wicinski |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-eppext-tmch-smd-03-opsdir-lc-wicinski-2015-12-04
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| Reviewed revision | 03 (document currently at 06) | |
| Result | Has Nits | |
| Completed | 2015-12-04 |
review-ietf-eppext-tmch-smd-03-opsdir-lc-wicinski-2015-12-04-00
All,
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational
directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG. These
comments were written with the intent of improving the
operational aspects of the
IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call
may be included in AD reviews
during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs
should treat these comments
just like any other last call comments.
General Summary: Ready with nits
In doing this write up after I wrote my comments, I went
and researched the mail archive, and I found Russ Housley's very
succinct Gen-Art review:
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/jBbrcEzrRlSPWGcjEVdvTO41ckQ
Specifically the Appendix in the wrong place, the insertion
of copyrights in Sections 3.1 and 3.2
Additionally, in Section 2 "Object Description" there are
elements for the objects that are marked OPTIONAL or MUST.
However, there are many which are not defined either way. The
"assumption" is they are a MUST. If this is true perhaps some text
at the beginning of the definitions
"Unless otherwise specified, any element defined is a
MUST".
tim