Last Call Review of draft-ietf-fecframe-rtp-raptor-
review-ietf-fecframe-rtp-raptor-genart-lc-carpenter-2011-11-03-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-fecframe-rtp-raptor |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 07) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2011-11-01 | |
Requested | 2011-11-01 | |
Authors | Michael Luby , Mark Watson , Thomas Stockhammer | |
I-D last updated | 2011-11-03 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -??
by Brian E. Carpenter
Tsvdir Last Call review of -?? by David Harrington |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Brian E. Carpenter |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-fecframe-rtp-raptor by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Completed | 2011-11-03 |
review-ietf-fecframe-rtp-raptor-genart-lc-carpenter-2011-11-03-00
Please see attached review. I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-fecframe-rtp-raptor-05.txt Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review Date: 2011-10-30 IETF LC End Date: 2011-11-03 IESG Telechat date: 2011-11-03 Summary: Ready (with nits) -------- Comments: --------- A large part of this draft consists of media type definitions which appear correct, and I assume they have been through the required expert review. I could not find any significant issues. Nits ---- Typo in page header title: RTP Payload Fromat for Raptor s/Fromat/Format/ I noticed several places where an upper-case MAY is used unnecessarily IMHO, and a plain English lower case "may" would be fine: - all three MAYs in the Introduction; - the first sentence of section 3; - all three MAYs in the last paragraph of the Security Conisderations.