Telechat Review of draft-ietf-forces-lfb-lib-11
review-ietf-forces-lfb-lib-11-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2013-03-23-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-forces-lfb-lib
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-03-26
Requested 2013-03-21
Authors Weiming Wang , Evangelos Haleplidis , Kentaro Ogawa , Chuanhuang Li , Joel M. Halpern
I-D last updated 2013-03-23
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -10 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Derek Atkins (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-forces-lfb-lib by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 12)
Result Ready
Completed 2013-03-23
review-ietf-forces-lfb-lib-11-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2013-03-23-00

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Document: draft-ietf-forces-lfb-lib-11

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour

Review Date: 2013-03-23

IETF LC End Date: 2013-02-11

IESG Telechat date: 2013-03-28



Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Proposed Standard, but I have a
comment.



Editorial comment:

Section 11, the following sentence can be written :

"The ForCES protocol document [RFC5810] includes a comprehensive set of
security mechanisms and which implementations are required to support, and
which deployments can use to meet these needs.  "

Suggestion:

"The ForCES protocol document [RFC5810] includes a comprehensive set of
security mechanisms that implementations are required to support to meet these
needs."





Best Regards,

Meral

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Meral Shirazipour

Ericsson

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