Last Call Review of draft-ietf-geojson-02
review-ietf-geojson-02-genart-lc-shirazipour-2016-05-31-00

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Document: draft-ietf-geojson-03

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour

Review Date: 2016-06-01

IETF LC End Date: 2016-05-31

IESG Telechat date: 2016-06-02





Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC, but I have
some comments.



Major issues:



Minor issues:



Nits/editorial comments:

-[Page 3], "any thing"--typo-->"anything"



-[Page 4], KML not spelled out at first use (Keyhole Markup Language?)



-[Page 11],PIDF-LO, please spell out at first use and maybe reference RFC5139.



-[Page 11], it says

"Applications such as PIDF-LO that are sensitive to location

   uncertainty and confidence might treat ...

"

Not clear: if this is not an OK behavior, it should say "should not treat..."?
If this is an ok behavior, maybe it should say "MAY treat ..."



-[Page 12], "in the the case"---typo-->"in the case"



-[Page 12], "the OGC's "http://www.opengis.net/def/crs/OGC/1.3/CRS84" [OGCURL].
"

Should the URL  be moved to reference section?



-[Page 13], "or to to have"--typo-->"or to have"



-[Page 16], "the the semantics"--typo-->"the semantics"



-[Page 18], "can not be"---->"cannot be"





Best Regards,

Meral

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Meral Shirazipour

Ericsson Research

www.ericsson.com