Last Call Review of draft-ietf-geopriv-flow-identity-01
review-ietf-geopriv-flow-identity-01-genart-lc-moriarty-2013-02-23-00
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Document: draft-ietf-geopriv-flow-identity-01
Reviewer: Kathleen Moriarty
Review Date: February 23, 2013
IETF LC End Date: Thursday
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Summary: The draft is ready for publication, it is well written and the XML schema in section 4 validates properly.
Abstract:
RFC 6155 specifies an extension for the HTTP-Enabled Location
Delivery (HELD) Protocol allowing the use of an IP address and port
number to request a Device location based on an individual packet
flow.
However, certain kinds of NAT require that identifiers for both ends
of the packet flow must be specified in order to unambiguously
satisfy the location request.
This document specifies an XML Schema and URN Sub-Namespace for a
Flow Identity Extension for HELD to support this requirement.
This document updates RFC 6155 by deprecating the port number
elements specified therein.
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