Last Call Review of draft-ietf-geopriv-flow-identity-01

Request Review of draft-ietf-geopriv-flow-identity
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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-02-27
Requested 2013-02-14
Authors Ray Bellis
Draft last updated 2013-02-23
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -01 by Kathleen Moriarty (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Kathleen Moriarty 
State Completed Snapshot
Review review-ietf-geopriv-flow-identity-01-genart-lc-moriarty-2013-02-23
Reviewed rev. 01 (document currently at 02)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2013-02-23


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Document: draft-ietf-geopriv-flow-identity-01

Reviewer: Kathleen Moriarty

Review Date: February 23, 2013

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Summary:  The draft is ready for publication, it is well written and the XML schema in section 4 validates properly.




   RFC 6155 specifies an extension for the HTTP-Enabled Location

   Delivery (HELD) Protocol allowing the use of an IP address and port

   number to request a Device location based on an individual packet



   However, certain kinds of NAT require that identifiers for both ends

   of the packet flow must be specified in order to unambiguously

   satisfy the location request.


   This document specifies an XML Schema and URN Sub-Namespace for a

   Flow Identity Extension for HELD to support this requirement.


   This document updates RFC 6155 by deprecating the port number

   elements specified therein.


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