Last Call Review of draft-ietf-geopriv-res-gw-lis-discovery-07
review-ietf-geopriv-res-gw-lis-discovery-07-genart-lc-yee-2013-11-18-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-geopriv-res-gw-lis-discovery |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 08) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2013-11-18 | |
Requested | 2013-11-06 | |
Authors | Martin Thomson , Ray Bellis | |
I-D last updated | 2013-11-18 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -05
by Peter E. Yee
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Genart Last Call review of -07 by Peter E. Yee (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Catherine Meadows (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Nevil Brownlee (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Peter E. Yee |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-geopriv-res-gw-lis-discovery by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 07 (document currently at 08) | |
Result | Ready w/nits | |
Completed | 2013-11-18 |
review-ietf-geopriv-res-gw-lis-discovery-07-genart-lc-yee-2013-11-18-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-geopriv-res-gw-lis-discovery-08 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Nov-18-2013 IETF LC End Date: Jul-31-2013 IESG Telechat date: Nov-21-2013 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. [Ready with nits] The draft describes a means by which Devices behind a residential gateway may discover the correct Location Information Server on the access network providing Internet access to residential gateway. The Device may thereby gain access to certain location-based services. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits: Page 13, 3rd paragraph, 3rd sentence: change ³even in the² to ³even if the². Insert ³degree of² before ³accuracy².