Last Call Review of draft-ietf-grow-bmp-15
review-ietf-grow-bmp-15-genart-lc-gurbani-2015-10-14-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-grow-bmp |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 17) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2015-09-15 | |
Requested | 2015-09-01 | |
Authors | John Scudder , Rex Fernando , Stephen Stuart | |
I-D last updated | 2015-10-14 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -15
by Vijay K. Gurbani
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Secdir Early review of -15 by Hannes Tschofenig (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -15 by Mahesh Jethanandani (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Vijay K. Gurbani |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-grow-bmp by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 15 (document currently at 17) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2015-10-14 |
review-ietf-grow-bmp-15-genart-lc-gurbani-2015-10-14-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-grow-bmp-15 Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: Oct-14-2015 IETF LC End Date: Not known IESG Telechat date: Oct-15-2015 This document is ready as a Proposed Standard with two minor nits. Major: 0 Minor: 2 Nits: 0 Minor: - S3.2,, first paragraph: "No message is ever sent from the monitoring station to the monitored router." You mean "No BMP message is ever sent from the monitoring station to the monitored router."? I suspect that the monitoring station can send TCP messages (SYN, ACK, etc.) to the monitored router in order to open up the TCP connection, no? - S3.2, last paragraph: "If the monitoring station intends to end or restart BMP processing, it simply drops the connection, optionally with a Termination message." The monitoring station cannot send a (BMP?) message to the monitored router, right? If so, I don't understand the utility of the Termination method above. Thanks, - vijay -- Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent 1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60563 (USA) Email: vkg@{bell-labs.com,acm.org} / vijay.gurbani at alcatel-lucent.com Web: http://ect.bell-labs.com/who/vkg/ | Calendar: http://goo.gl/x3Ogq