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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-grow-bmp-15
review-ietf-grow-bmp-15-opsdir-lc-jethanandani-2015-09-30-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-grow-bmp
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2015-10-13
Requested 2015-09-03
Authors John Scudder , Rex Fernando , Stephen Stuart
I-D last updated 2015-09-30
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -15 by Vijay K. Gurbani (diff)
Secdir Early review of -15 by Hannes Tschofenig (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -15 by Mahesh Jethanandani (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Mahesh Jethanandani
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-grow-bmp by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 15 (document currently at 17)
Result Has nits
Completed 2015-09-30
review-ietf-grow-bmp-15-opsdir-lc-jethanandani-2015-09-30-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate’s ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
 These comments were written with the intent of improving the
operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last
call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors
and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last
call comments.

Document reviewed:  draft-ietf-grow-bmp-15

Status:

Ready with comments

Summary:

This document defines a protocol, BMP, that can be used to monitor BGP
sessions.  BMP is intended to provide a convenient interface for obtaining
route views.  Prior to introduction of BMP, screen-scraping was the most
commonly-used approach to obtaining such views.  The design goals are to keep
BMP simple, useful, easily implemented, and minimally service-affecting.  BMP
is not suitable for use as a routing protocol.

The document is on standards track and defines another monitoring method
specifically for BGP. The original draft is dated 2005, long before NETCONF or
YANG were defined, and when there was probably no way to view routes. With the
advent of NETCONF and specifically the BGP YANG model, which is currently a WG
document, it would be helpful to know how BMP stands apart. The NETCONF
notification structure allows for notifications described in this draft and the
ability to collect stats reports and route monitoring. It would be helpful to
know how BMP compliments that capability.

In addition, the following nits need to be addressed in the document.

Miscellaneous warnings:

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  == Outdated reference: draft-ietf-idr-error-handling has been published as

     RFC 7606

Thanks.

Mahesh Jethanandani

mjethanandani at gmail.com