Last Call Review of draft-ietf-grow-bmp-adj-rib-out-05
review-ietf-grow-bmp-adj-rib-out-05-genart-lc-dunbar-2019-06-14-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-grow-bmp-adj-rib-out
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-06-25
Requested 2019-06-11
Authors Tim Evens , Serpil Bayraktar , Paolo Lucente , Kevin Mi, Shunwan Zhuang
I-D last updated 2019-06-14
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -05 by Acee Lindem (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Catherine Meadows (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-grow-bmp-adj-rib-out by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/_GM5K5YuxAzv_vaJiYqxjqe2QI0
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 07)
Result Almost ready
Completed 2019-06-14
review-ietf-grow-bmp-adj-rib-out-05-genart-lc-dunbar-2019-06-14-00
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Document: draft-ietf-grow-bmp-adj-rib-out-??
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2019-06-14
IETF LC End Date: 2019-06-25
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

The draft updates the BGP Monitoring Protocol BMP by adding access to the
Adj-RIB-Out RIBs. There are some unclear areas that need authors to clarify.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Section 1 last paragraph:
It is not clear if BMP sender send to multiple BMP receivers  or just  to one
"BMP receiver". The first part of the sentence says "..send to a BMP
receivers", the second part says ".. advertise to BGP peers, .."

Suggest to make it consistent, such as sending  to multiple, or just one.   "..
to send to BMP receivers what it advertises.."

Does a BMP sender also send out Adj-RIB-In? it is not clear to.

Section 6 first sentence: just curious which BMP messages are NOT applicable to
Adj-RIB-In or Adj-RIB-out?   If it is specified in other documents, please add
a reference.

Nits/editorial comments:

Thank you.

Linda Dunbar