IETF Last Call Review of draft-ietf-grow-bmp-bgp-rib-stats-12
review-ietf-grow-bmp-bgp-rib-stats-12-opsdir-lc-fioccola-2025-10-24-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-grow-bmp-bgp-rib-stats |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 17) | |
| Type | IETF Last Call Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2025-10-24 | |
| Requested | 2025-10-10 | |
| Requested by | Mohamed Boucadair | |
| Authors | Mukul Srivastava , Yisong Liu , Changwang Lin , Jinming Li | |
| I-D last updated | 2025-12-15 (Latest revision 2025-12-03) | |
| Completed reviews |
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -12
by Giuseppe Fioccola
(diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -12 by Jouni Korhonen (diff) Rtgdir IETF Last Call review of -10 by Bruno Decraene (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Giuseppe Fioccola |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-grow-bmp-bgp-rib-stats by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/RBNxlhaUL5zRxYolJyIPlDiP_c0 | |
| Reviewed revision | 12 (document currently at 17) | |
| Result | Has nits | |
| Completed | 2025-10-24 |
review-ietf-grow-bmp-bgp-rib-stats-12-opsdir-lc-fioccola-2025-10-24-00
This document defines new parameters in the BMP Statistics. It is quite clear and well-written. From an OPSDIR point of view, I think it is good to have a section on "Operational Considerations", as also highlighted in draft-opsarea-rfc5706bis. Maybe the section can be renamed as "Operations & Management Considerations", adding more details about the management aspects. I would also describe the typical application scenarios where the new gauges are useful in order to allow the reader to better understand the applicability. I have additional general comments: - I would add some considerations in the Introduction to explain the background and the motivation for these new parameters. - Regarding the terminology, in RFC 7854 it is mentioned that Adj-RIB-In is also referred to as the pre-policy Adj-RIB-In. Since they are defined separately in this document, I would clarify this point to avoid misunderstanding. I guess the same could apply to Adj-RIB-Out. - I suggest to improve the Security Considerations section, by highlighting whether or not the new gauges add new security concerns compared to RFC 7854.