Last Call Review of draft-ietf-hip-dex-06
review-ietf-hip-dex-06-opsdir-lc-wu-2018-02-23-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-hip-dex |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 24) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2018-02-26 | |
| Requested | 2018-02-12 | |
| Authors | Robert Moskowitz , Rene Hummen , Miika Komu | |
| I-D last updated | 2018-02-23 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -06
by Francis Dupont
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Secdir Last Call review of -06 by David Waltermire (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Qin Wu (diff) Iotdir Last Call review of -11 by Michael Richardson (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Donald E. Eastlake 3rd (diff) Genart Last Call review of -11 by Francis Dupont (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -20 by Donald E. Eastlake 3rd (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Qin Wu |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-hip-dex by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 06 (document currently at 24) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2018-02-23 |
review-ietf-hip-dex-06-opsdir-lc-wu-2018-02-23-00
Summary: This document defines the Host Identity Protocol Diet EXchange (HIP DEX) protocol for constrained devices. The draft is well written. I believe it is ready for publication. Major issue: None Minor issue: Editorial 1.It is not clear how fine-grained policy control defined in IKEv2 is different from policy control defined in HIP DEX protocol? In the draft, local policies are mentioned many times, however it is not clear what local policy for HIP DEX Protocol looks like? Is it possbile to carry policy control parameters(e.g., ACL parameter) in the HIP DEX protocol message? Would it be great to provide example to clarify this. 2. Is Nonce I same as radom value #I? 3. Is puzzle difficulty K same as #K used in the HIP R1 described in section 7? 4. Is puzzle difficulty K same as low-order #K bits of the RHASH? If the answer is yes, please make the term and symbol used in the draft consistent.