Last Call Review of draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-27
review-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-27-opsdir-lc-zhou-2018-02-27-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 33)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2018-02-26
Requested 2018-02-12
Authors Ari Keränen , Jan Melen , Miika Komu
I-D last updated 2021-07-15 (Latest revision 2020-08-03)
Completed reviews Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -27 by Tianran Zhou (diff)
Tsvart IETF Last Call review of -27 by Colin Perkins (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -27 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -28 by Carl Wallace (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -28 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -30 by Carl Wallace (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tianran Zhou
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 27 (document currently at 33)
Result Ready
Completed 2018-02-27
review-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-27-opsdir-lc-zhou-2018-02-27-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

I did not see any special operational or network management related issue. This
document is clear to me and is ready for publication.

Cheers,
Tianran