Last Call Review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc5204-bis-06
review-ietf-hip-rfc5204-bis-06-genart-lc-halpern-2015-12-16-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc5204-bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-12-28
Requested 2015-12-15
Authors Julien Laganier , Lars Eggert
I-D last updated 2015-12-16
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -06 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Intdir Early review of -06 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Intdir Early review of -06 by Zhen Cao (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Joel M. Halpern
State Completed
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Result Ready w/issues
Completed 2015-12-16
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Document: draft-ietf-hip-rfc5204-bis-06
    Host Identity Protocol (HIP) Rendezvous Extension
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 16-Dec-2015
IETF LC End Date: 28-Dec-2015
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard

Major issues:

Minor issues:


    Appendix A states that this document was changed by "Added relaying 


of UPDATE packets to support double jump mobility scenario."  Searching 


the document for the word update, I do not find any such relaying 


description.




Nits/editorial comments: