Early Review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc5204-bis-06
review-ietf-hip-rfc5204-bis-06-intdir-early-cao-2015-12-02-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-hip-rfc5204-bis |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 08) | |
Type | Early Review | |
Team | Internet Area Directorate (intdir) | |
Deadline | 2015-12-02 | |
Requested | 2015-11-20 | |
Authors | Julien Laganier , Lars Eggert | |
I-D last updated | 2015-12-02 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -06
by Joel M. Halpern
(diff)
Intdir Early review of -06 by Sheng Jiang (diff) Intdir Early review of -06 by Zhen Cao (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Zhen Cao |
State | Completed | |
Request | Early review on draft-ietf-hip-rfc5204-bis by Internet Area Directorate Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 06 (document currently at 08) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2015-12-02 |
review-ietf-hip-rfc5204-bis-06-intdir-early-cao-2015-12-02-00
"I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-hip-rfc5204-bis These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments just like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and resolve them along with any other Last Call comments that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate, see http://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate.html." ; I found the document well written and it contains minor but necessary updates to RFC5204. The changed portion of this document is well stated and I believe this document is ready to be published. Some editorial findings by idnits below: == Outdated reference: draft-ietf-hip-rfc5201-bis has been published as RFC 7401 == Outdated reference: A later version (-09) exists of draft-ietf-hip-rfc5203-bis-07 == Outdated reference: A later version (-07) exists of draft-ietf-hip-rfc5205-bis-06 == Outdated reference: A later version (-12) exists of draft-ietf-hip-rfc4423-bis-11 == Outdated reference: A later version (-09) exists of draft-ietf-hip-rfc5206-bis-08 -Zhen