Early Review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc5205-bis-07
review-ietf-hip-rfc5205-bis-07-intdir-early-cao-2015-12-02-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc5205-bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Early Review
Team Internet Area Directorate (intdir)
Deadline 2015-12-02
Requested 2015-11-20
Authors Julien Laganier
I-D last updated 2015-12-02
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -08 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Tina Tsou (Ting ZOU) (diff)
Intdir Early review of -07 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Intdir Early review of -07 by Zhen Cao (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Stefan Winter (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Zhen Cao
State Completed
Request Early review on draft-ietf-hip-rfc5205-bis by Internet Area Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 07 (document currently at 10)
Result Ready
Completed 2015-12-02
review-ietf-hip-rfc5205-bis-07-intdir-early-cao-2015-12-02-00
Hi Authors,

"I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-hip-rfc5205-bis
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet
Area Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these
comments just like they would treat comments from any other IETF
contributors and resolve them along with any other Last Call comments
that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate,
see 

http://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate.html.&quot

;

The document present minor but clear &necessary updates to RFC5205.

I find the document is ready.

One editorial suggestion in the Appendix A as below. This could help
developers to identify the delta text a bit easier.

   o  Extended DNS HIP RR to support for Host Identities based on
      Elliptic Curve Digital Signature Algorithm (ECDSA).  [Section 5.5]

   o  Clarified that new query must be made when the time that passed
      since a RR was retrieved exceeds the TTL of the RR. [Section 4.2]

   o  Added considerations related to multiple HIP RRs being associated
      with a single name. [Section 4.2]

-Zhen