Last Call Review of draft-ietf-hokey-rfc5296bis-
review-ietf-hokey-rfc5296bis-secdir-lc-kaufman-2012-03-16-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-hokey-rfc5296bis
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Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2012-03-12
Requested 2012-03-01
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Review State Completed
Reviewer Charlie Kaufman
Review review-ietf-hokey-rfc5296bis-secdir-lc-kaufman-2012-03-16
Posted at http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/current/msg03162.html
Draft last updated 2012-03-16
Review completed: 2012-03-16

Review
review-ietf-hokey-rfc5296bis-secdir-lc-kaufman-2012-03-16






I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors.  Document
 editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.




 




This document incorporates the errata from rfc5296, but (as far as I could tell) contained no technical changes. Advancing it should be non-controversial. I found no typos. My only quibble is that it would have been helpful if there had
 been an appendix (perhaps to be deleted when advanced) enumerating the changes since rfc5296.




 




                --Charlie