Telechat Review of draft-ietf-homenet-naming-architecture-dhc-options-21
review-ietf-homenet-naming-architecture-dhc-options-21-opsdir-telechat-morton-2022-10-06-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-homenet-naming-architecture-dhc-options
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 24)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2022-10-18
Requested 2022-10-04
Authors Daniel Migault , Ralf Weber , Tomek Mrugalski
I-D last updated 2024-01-28 (Latest revision 2022-10-31)
Completed reviews Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -20 by Al Morton (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -21 by Ines Robles (diff)
Artart IETF Last Call review of -21 by Bron Gondwana (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -21 by Hilarie Orman (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -21 by Al Morton (diff)
Dnsdir Telechat review of -21 by R. (Miek) Gieben (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Al Morton
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-homenet-naming-architecture-dhc-options by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/5R0G99nXwtq59_pwcQMIXUEml20
Reviewed revision 21 (document currently at 24)
Result Has nits
Completed 2022-10-06
review-ietf-homenet-naming-architecture-dhc-options-21-opsdir-telechat-morton-2022-10-06-00
In Appendix A, the text says, "In this *section*..."  It's more accurate to
say, "In this *Appendix*..." I tried to explain this in my previous review.
Hopefully this comment is clearer.

There are likely other cases in Appendix B that need the same fix.