Telechat Review of draft-ietf-homenet-naming-architecture-dhc-options-21
review-ietf-homenet-naming-architecture-dhc-options-21-opsdir-telechat-morton-2022-10-06-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-homenet-naming-architecture-dhc-options |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 24) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2022-10-18 | |
| Requested | 2022-10-04 | |
| Authors | Daniel Migault , Ralf Weber , Tomek Mrugalski | |
| I-D last updated | 2022-10-06 | |
| Completed reviews |
Opsdir Last Call review of -20
by Al Morton
(diff)
Genart Last Call review of -21 by Ines Robles (diff) Artart Last Call review of -21 by Bron Gondwana (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -21 by Hilarie Orman (diff) Opsdir Telechat review of -21 by Al Morton (diff) Dnsdir Telechat review of -21 by R. (Miek) Gieben (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Al Morton |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-homenet-naming-architecture-dhc-options by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/5R0G99nXwtq59_pwcQMIXUEml20 | |
| Reviewed revision | 21 (document currently at 24) | |
| Result | Has nits | |
| Completed | 2022-10-06 |
review-ietf-homenet-naming-architecture-dhc-options-21-opsdir-telechat-morton-2022-10-06-00
In Appendix A, the text says, "In this *section*..." It's more accurate to say, "In this *Appendix*..." I tried to explain this in my previous review. Hopefully this comment is clearer. There are likely other cases in Appendix B that need the same fix.