Last Call Review of draft-ietf-homenet-prefix-assignment-06
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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-06-11
Requested 2015-05-28
Draft last updated 2015-06-11
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -06 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -07 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Matthew Miller (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Tim Chown (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Review review-ietf-homenet-prefix-assignment-06-genart-lc-shirazipour-2015-06-11
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 08)
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Review completed: 2015-06-11

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Document: draft-ietf-homenet-prefix-assignment-06




Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour




Review Date: 2015-06-11




IETF LC End Date:  2015-06-11




IESG Telechat date: NA




 




 




Summary:




This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.




 




 




 




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Nits/editorial comments:




I found the draft a bit hard to follow as the incentive was not clear at first.





A few sentences in abstract or introduction on 'why' we need this algorithm and what would the 'alternatives' be would be useful.




Right now it only says 'what' the algorithm does.




 




 




Best Regards,




Meral




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