Last Call Review of draft-ietf-homenet-prefix-assignment-06
review-ietf-homenet-prefix-assignment-06-genart-lc-shirazipour-2015-06-11-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-homenet-prefix-assignment |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 08) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2015-06-11 | |
| Requested | 2015-05-28 | |
| Authors | Pierre Pfister , Benjamin Paterson , Jari Arkko | |
| I-D last updated | 2015-06-11 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -06
by Meral Shirazipour
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Genart Telechat review of -07 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Matthew A. Miller (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Tim Chown (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-homenet-prefix-assignment by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 06 (document currently at 08) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2015-06-11 |
review-ietf-homenet-prefix-assignment-06-genart-lc-shirazipour-2015-06-11-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-homenet-prefix-assignment-06 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2015-06-11 IETF LC End Date: 2015-06-11 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: I found the draft a bit hard to follow as the incentive was not clear at first. A few sentences in abstract or introduction on 'why' we need this algorithm and what would the 'alternatives' be would be useful. Right now it only says 'what' the algorithm does. Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com