Telechat Review of draft-ietf-httpauth-extension-06

Request Review of draft-ietf-httpauth-extension
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2016-08-26
Requested 2016-08-01
Authors Yutaka Oiwa, Hajime Watanabe, Hiromitsu Takagi, Kaoru Maeda, Tatsuya Hayashi, Yuichi Ioku
Draft last updated 2016-08-16
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -08 by Matthew Miller (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -06 by Rick Casarez (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Rick Casarez
State Completed
Review review-ietf-httpauth-extension-06-opsdir-telechat-casarez-2016-08-16
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 09)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2016-08-16



I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. 

Summary: Ready with a nit

Section 3, paragraph 3:

Some sentence cleanup is required so that this remains clear. I believe I understand what is being said as far as implementation goes but some cleanup would make this paragraph more concise.


Cheers, Rick