Last Call Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-cdn-loop-01
review-ietf-httpbis-cdn-loop-01-tsvart-lc-perkins-2018-12-06-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-cdn-loop
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 02)
Type Last Call Review
Team Transport Area Review Team (tsvart)
Deadline 2018-12-11
Requested 2018-11-27
Authors Stephen Ludin , Mark Nottingham , Nick Sullivan
I-D last updated 2018-12-06
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Donald E. Eastlake 3rd (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -01 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -01 by Colin Perkins (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Colin Perkins
State Completed Snapshot
Review review-ietf-httpbis-cdn-loop-01-tsvart-lc-perkins-2018-12-06
Reviewed revision 01 (document currently at 02)
Result Ready
Completed 2018-12-06
review-ietf-httpbis-cdn-loop-01-tsvart-lc-perkins-2018-12-06-00
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I have reviewed draft-ietf-httpbis-cdn-loop-01. It defines a new HTTP header
that can be used to detect CDN forwarding loops. There are no apparent
transport issues. 

Editorial: The terminology 'The CDN-Loop Request Header' can easily be
misread to suggest that the CDN is being requested to loop traffic. Using
instead 'The "CDN-Loop" Request Header' might make this clearer.

Colin