Last Call Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets-01
review-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets-01-genart-lc-gurbani-2022-01-11-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2022-01-19
Requested 2022-01-05
Authors Ryan Hamilton
I-D last updated 2022-06-08 (Latest revision 2022-02-08)
Completed reviews Artart IETF Last Call review of -02 by Tim Bray (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -02 by Tirumaleswar Reddy.K (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -01 by Vijay K. Gurbani (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Vijay K. Gurbani
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/MA9WZc8SHIyjFmEN_0yCkUuFodo
Reviewed revision 01 (document currently at 04)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2022-01-11
review-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets-01-genart-lc-gurbani-2022-01-11-00
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Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets-01
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 2022-01-11
IETF LC End Date: 2022-01-19
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready for publication as a proposed standard.

Major issues: 0

Minor issues: 0

Nits/editorial comments: 1

In Section 3, last paragraph: s/If a server which advertises/If a server that advertises/
(Reason: Restrictive clauses should use "that" [1]).
[1] https://www.dictionary.com/e/that-vs-which/

Thanks,

- vijay