Last Call Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets-01
review-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets-01-genart-lc-gurbani-2022-01-11-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 04) | |
Type | IETF Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2022-01-19 | |
Requested | 2022-01-05 | |
Authors | Ryan Hamilton | |
I-D last updated | 2022-06-08 (Latest revision 2022-02-08) | |
Completed reviews |
Artart IETF Last Call review of -02
by Tim Bray
(diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -02 by Tirumaleswar Reddy.K (diff) Genart IETF Last Call review of -01 by Vijay K. Gurbani (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Vijay K. Gurbani |
State | Completed | |
Request | IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/MA9WZc8SHIyjFmEN_0yCkUuFodo | |
Reviewed revision | 01 (document currently at 04) | |
Result | Ready w/nits | |
Completed | 2022-01-11 |
review-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets-01-genart-lc-gurbani-2022-01-11-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets-01 Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: 2022-01-11 IETF LC End Date: 2022-01-19 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Ready for publication as a proposed standard. Major issues: 0 Minor issues: 0 Nits/editorial comments: 1 In Section 3, last paragraph: s/If a server which advertises/If a server that advertises/ (Reason: Restrictive clauses should use "that" [1]). [1] https://www.dictionary.com/e/that-vs-which/ Thanks, - vijay