Last Call Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-http2-tls13-02
review-ietf-httpbis-http2-tls13-02-opsdir-lc-zhou-2019-10-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-http2-tls13
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2019-10-11
Requested 2019-09-27
Authors David Benjamin
I-D last updated 2020-02-23 (Latest revision 2019-10-17)
Completed reviews Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -02 by Tianran Zhou (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -02 by Rich Salz (diff)
Artart IETF Last Call review of -02 by Matthew A. Miller (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -02 by Erik Kline (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tianran Zhou
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-httpbis-http2-tls13 by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/pvg2pF3R725JJAV4r7j17XG4CJk
Reviewed revision 02 (document currently at 03)
Result Ready
Completed 2019-10-13
review-ietf-httpbis-http2-tls13-02-opsdir-lc-zhou-2019-10-13-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

This draft is compact and easy to read. I did not see issue from the
operational aspect. It's ready.