Last Call Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-http2-tls13-02
review-ietf-httpbis-http2-tls13-02-opsdir-lc-zhou-2019-10-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-http2-tls13
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2019-10-11
Requested 2019-09-27
Authors David Benjamin
Draft last updated 2019-10-13
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -02 by Tianran Zhou (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -02 by Rich Salz (diff)
Artart Last Call review of -02 by Matthew Miller (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -02 by Erik Kline (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tianran Zhou
State Completed
Review review-ietf-httpbis-http2-tls13-02-opsdir-lc-zhou-2019-10-13
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/pvg2pF3R725JJAV4r7j17XG4CJk
Reviewed rev. 02 (document currently at 03)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2019-10-13

Review
review-ietf-httpbis-http2-tls13-02-opsdir-lc-zhou-2019-10-13

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

This draft is compact and easy to read. I did not see issue from the operational aspect. It's ready.