Last Call Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-frame-04
Summary: Ready with editorial nits.
Major issues: none
Minor Issues: Editorials
o The document does not pass IDnits.
** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 2818
This is obviously intentional but I did not see any mention of this e.g., in the proto write-up.
-- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 5988
This should obviously be 8288 as it obsoletes 5988.
o line 256 s/clients SHOULD not/clients SHOULD NOT
o line 146 s/The origin frame/The ORIGIN frame
o line 429 What does "case-normalization" mean? I could not immediately find that expression, at least not in the referenced RFC6454. If it means making the ORIGIN header values lower case, just state that.