Last Call Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-frame-04
review-ietf-httpbis-origin-frame-04-opsdir-lc-korhonen-2017-12-01-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-frame
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2017-11-30
Requested 2017-11-16
Authors Mark Nottingham , Erik Nygren
I-D last updated 2017-12-01
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Brian E. Carpenter (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Jouni Korhonen
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-frame by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 04 (document currently at 06)
Result Has nits
Completed 2017-12-01
review-ietf-httpbis-origin-frame-04-opsdir-lc-korhonen-2017-12-01-00
Summary: Ready with editorial nits.

Major issues: none

Minor Issues: Editorials

o The document does not pass IDnits.

  ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 2818

   This is obviously intentional but I did not see any mention of this e.g., in
   the proto write-up.

  -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 5988
   This should obviously be 8288 as it obsoletes 5988.

o line 256         s/clients SHOULD not/clients SHOULD NOT
o line 146         s/The origin frame/The ORIGIN frame
o line 429    What does "case-normalization" mean? I could not immediately find
that expression, at least not in the referenced RFC6454. If it means making the
ORIGIN header values lower case, just state that.