Last Call Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-rfc5987bis-04
review-ietf-httpbis-rfc5987bis-04-genart-lc-bryant-2017-02-23-00

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Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-rfc5987bis-??
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2017-02-23
IETF LC End Date: 2017-02-20
IESG Telechat date: 2017-03-02

Summary:

Thus is ready for publication. There are two minor nits, but these can be
delegated to the RFC Editor.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

Should say

Obsoletes: RFC5987 (if approved) ("RFC" missing)

Extended notation, using the Unicode characters U+00A3 ("£", POUND
SIGN) and U+20AC ("€", EURO SIGN):

My European computer can display £ and €, but not sure if all can or whether
the RFC series supports these symbols. There symbols were not present in
RFC5987, they were just named.

FYI
Nits complains about obsoleting RFC2231 can be ignored
The nits complaint about RFC2616 can be ignored
The nits complaint about RFC2978 cab be ignored