Telechat Review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-framework-08
review-ietf-i2nsf-framework-08-opsdir-telechat-martinez-2017-10-23-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-framework
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2017-10-24
Requested 2017-10-02
Authors Diego Lopez , Edward Lopez, Linda Dunbar , John Strassner , Rakesh Kumar
I-D last updated 2017-10-23
Completed reviews Genart Telechat review of -08 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -08 by Carlos M. Martínez (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -08 by Daniel Fox Franke (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Carlos M. Martínez
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-i2nsf-framework by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 10)
Result Ready
Completed 2017-10-23
review-ietf-i2nsf-framework-08-opsdir-telechat-martinez-2017-10-23-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

Overall I've found this document to be READY. I do believe that some parts'
readability could be improved however, particularly Section 5. This section
describes some principles a potential implementation of the spec should follow
but provides little or no justification for them. I believe additional text
could help.

Thank you to the authors for their great work!

Carlos