Early Review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-registration-interface-dm-17
review-ietf-i2nsf-registration-interface-dm-17-secdir-early-kelly-2022-06-05-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-registration-interface-dm-16
Requested revision 16 (document currently at 23)
Type Early Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2022-06-17
Requested 2022-05-17
Requested by Linda Dunbar
Authors Sangwon Hyun , Jaehoon Paul Jeong , TaeKyun Roh , Sarang Wi , Park Jung-Soo
I-D last updated 2022-06-05
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Last Call review of -08 by Reshad Rahman (diff)
Secdir Early review of -17 by Scott G. Kelly (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -17 by Gyan Mishra (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -23 by Brian Trammell
Secdir Last Call review of -23 by Scott G. Kelly
Comments 
We appreciate Ops Area and Security Area Directorate review before the WGLC. 

Thank you very much
Linda Dunbar
Assignment Reviewer Scott G. Kelly
State Completed
Review review-ietf-i2nsf-registration-interface-dm-17-secdir-early-kelly-2022-06-05
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/8kAjU1qRZfJiZfS3KIpeMat5dPQ
Reviewed revision 17 (document currently at 23)
Result Ready
Completed 2022-06-05
review-ietf-i2nsf-registration-interface-dm-17-secdir-early-kelly-2022-06-05-00
From the abstract,
   This document defines an information model and a YANG data model for
   Registration Interface between Security Controller and Developer's
   Management System (DMS) in the Interface to Network Security
   Functions (I2NSF) framework to register Network Security Functions
   (NSF) of the DMS with the Security Controller.

The document contains a well-written security considerations section that
describes potential threats and mitigations. I have no experience with YANG,
but from a security point of view, I see no issues with this document.