Telechat Review of draft-ietf-i2rs-protocol-security-requirements-06
review-ietf-i2rs-protocol-security-requirements-06-opsdir-telechat-jethanandani-2016-08-16-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-i2rs-protocol-security-requirements
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2016-08-16
Requested 2016-08-01
Draft last updated 2016-08-16
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Radia Perlman (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -10 by Radia Perlman (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -06 by Mahesh Jethanandani (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -02 by Tomonori Takeda (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Mahesh Jethanandani
State Completed
Review review-ietf-i2rs-protocol-security-requirements-06-opsdir-telechat-jethanandani-2016-08-16
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 17)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2016-08-16

Review
review-ietf-i2rs-protocol-security-requirements-06-opsdir-telechat-jethanandani-2016-08-16

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate’s ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

Document reviewed:  draft-ietf-i2rs-protocol-security-requirements-06

Summary: 







The abstract of the document says “

This presents security-related requirements for the I2RS protocol for mutual authentication, transport protocols, data transfer and transactions”

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This document is on a informational track.




The document defines security requirements and as such does not discuss how the requirements are met.




Because the document is about requirements and does not define how the requirements should/are to be met, there are no management or operational considerations that need to be discussed about the document. 

A run of idnits reveals a few warnings, which will probably be fixed as the document progresses towards a RFC.

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  == Missing Reference: 'I7498-2' is mentioned on line 166, but not defined

  == Outdated reference: draft-ietf-i2rs-architecture has been published as

     RFC 7921

  == Outdated reference: draft-ietf-i2rs-problem-statement has been published

     as RFC 7920

  == Outdated reference: A later version (-15) exists of

     draft-ietf-i2rs-ephemeral-state-06

  == Outdated reference: draft-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-requirements has been

     published as RFC 7923

  == Outdated reference: draft-ietf-i2rs-traceability has been published as

     RFC 7922




Thanks.

Mahesh Jethanandani

mjethanandani at gmail.com