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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-requirements-06
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Request Review of draft-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-requirements
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-04-29
Requested 2016-04-14
Authors Eric Voit , Alexander Clemm , Alberto Gonzalez Prieto
I-D last updated 2016-05-04
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -06 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -05 by Scott G. Kelly (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -03 by Julien Meuric (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -03 by Dan Frost (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-requirements by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 09)
Result Ready
Completed 2016-05-04
review-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-requirements-06-genart-lc-dupont-2016-05-04-00
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Document: draft-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-requirements-06.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20160429
IETF LC End Date: 20160429
IESG Telechat date: 20160505

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 - Abstract page 1, 4.1 page 7 and 4.2.2 page 9: i.e. -> i.e.,

 - ToC page 2 and 2.2 page 5: variants -> Variants

 - ToC page 2 and 7 page 14: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments

 - 2.2 page 5: software[sacm-requirements] -> software [sacm-requirements]

Regards

Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr