Last Call Review of draft-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-requirements-06
review-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-requirements-06-genart-lc-dupont-2016-05-04-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-requirements |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 09) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2016-04-29 | |
Requested | 2016-04-14 | |
Authors | Eric Voit , Alexander Clemm , Alberto Gonzalez Prieto | |
I-D last updated | 2016-05-04 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -06
by Francis Dupont
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Secdir Telechat review of -05 by Scott G. Kelly (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Sheng Jiang (diff) Rtgdir Early review of -03 by Julien Meuric (diff) Rtgdir Early review of -03 by Dan Frost (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Francis Dupont |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-requirements by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 06 (document currently at 09) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2016-05-04 |
review-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-requirements-06-genart-lc-dupont-2016-05-04-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-requirements-06.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20160429 IETF LC End Date: 20160429 IESG Telechat date: 20160505 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - Abstract page 1, 4.1 page 7 and 4.2.2 page 9: i.e. -> i.e., - ToC page 2 and 2.2 page 5: variants -> Variants - ToC page 2 and 7 page 14: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 2.2 page 5: software[sacm-requirements] -> software [sacm-requirements] Regards Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr