Early Review of draft-ietf-i2rs-security-environment-reqs-00
I am the Routing Area Directorate member that was assigned the QA review of draft-
If you’re not familiar with the QA review process please see:
- overall the document is organized well and has a good flow leading from overall issues to specific issues and justified requirements.
- the document presumes familiarity with the I2RS architecture and states this plainly cuing the reader to look there first. That said
the document can be read standalone with a conceptual knowledge of the I2RS architecture.
See the attached document for marked up and inline comments.
- singular / plural usage needs to be consistent
- verb plural and tense match need attention
Note: I got through page 14. Many comments earlier in the doc apply to the few remaining sections.
Please let me know if you have any questions.