Early Review of draft-ietf-i2rs-security-environment-reqs-00
review-ietf-i2rs-security-environment-reqs-00-rtgdir-early-sinicrope-2016-06-27-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-i2rs-security-environment-reqs
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Early Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2016-06-27
Requested 2016-05-05
Authors Daniel Migault, Joel Halpern, Susan Hares
Draft last updated 2016-06-27
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -00 by Dave Sinicrope (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Dave Sinicrope 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-i2rs-security-environment-reqs-00-rtgdir-early-sinicrope-2016-06-27
Reviewed rev. 00 (document currently at 06)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2016-06-27

Review
review-ietf-i2rs-security-environment-reqs-00-rtgdir-early-sinicrope-2016-06-27





















Hello,




 




I am the Routing Area Directorate member that was assigned the QA review of draft-

ietf-i2rs-security-environment-reqs-01

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If you’re not familiar with the QA review process please see: 

https://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDirDocQa




 




BR


Dave










General Comments:




- overall the document is organized well and has a good flow leading from overall issues to specific issues and justified requirements.










- the document presumes familiarity with the I2RS architecture and states this plainly cuing  the reader to look there first.  That said
 the document can be read standalone with a conceptual knowledge of the I2RS architecture.










See the attached document for marked up and inline comments.










Nits




- singular / plural usage needs to be consistent




- verb plural and tense match need attention










Note: I got through page 14.  Many comments earlier in the doc apply to the few remaining sections.










Please let me know if you have any questions.




Dave































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