Telechat Review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-14
review-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-14-secdir-telechat-huitema-2020-07-07-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 18)
Type Telechat Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2020-07-07
Requested 2020-07-01
Authors Jie Dong, Xiugang Wei, Qin Wu, Mohamed Boucadair, Anders Liu
Draft last updated 2020-07-07
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -02 by Henning Rogge (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -04 by Henning Rogge (diff)
Yangdoctors Early review of -04 by Ladislav Lhotka (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -13 by Stig Venaas (diff)
Yangdoctors Last Call review of -13 by Ladislav Lhotka (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -13 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -13 by Christian Huitema (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -14 by Christian Huitema (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Christian Huitema 
State Completed Snapshot
Review review-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-14-secdir-telechat-huitema-2020-07-07
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/WSmGBBl0C9CNVvNj_NeTB3j9B50
Reviewed rev. 14 (document currently at 18)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2020-07-07

Review
review-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-14-secdir-telechat-huitema-2020-07-07

I have reviewed the changes made in draft 14. The new version of the security section recognizes and addresses the privacy issue flagged in my review of draft 13.