Last Call Review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-14
review-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-14-genart-lc-bryant-2017-07-25-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-14
Requested rev. 14 (document currently at 20)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-07-28
Requested 2017-07-12
Requested by Russ White
Authors Alexander Clemm, Jan Medved, Robert Varga, Nitin Bahadur, Hariharan Ananthakrishnan, Xufeng Liu
Draft last updated 2017-07-25
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -02 by John Drake (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -02 by Ines Robles (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -09 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Yangdoctors Early review of -02 by Kent Watsen (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -14 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -14 by Ines Robles (diff)
Yangdoctors Last Call review of -14 by Kent Watsen (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -18 by Radia Perlman (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -18 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -18 by Qin Wu (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Stewart Bryant
State Completed
Review review-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-14-genart-lc-bryant-2017-07-25
Reviewed rev. 14 (document currently at 20)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2017-07-25

Review
review-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-14-genart-lc-bryant-2017-07-25

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Document: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-14
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2017-07-25
IETF LC End Date: 2016-12-19
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready with a few minor English nits remaining.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: 

I notice that a number of the editorial comments in 

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-09-genart-lc-bryant-2016-12-12/

were not addressed, but I am sure the RFC Editor will pick them up.

I notice that RFC7952 is in the reference list but not called out in the text.