Last Call Review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-18
review-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-18-genart-lc-bryant-2017-11-30-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 19)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-12-11
Requested 2017-11-27
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Genart Last Call review of -14 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -14 by Ines Robles (diff)
Yangdoctors Last Call review of -14 by Kent Watsen (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -18 by Radia Perlman (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -18 by Qin Wu (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Stewart Bryant
Review review-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-18-genart-lc-bryant-2017-11-30
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/7YPlQnU1QiZnOIDom-tp36z7muA
Reviewed rev. 18 (document currently at 19)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2017-11-30
Review completed: 2017-11-30

Review
review-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-18-genart-lc-bryant-2017-11-30

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Document: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-18
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2017-11-30
IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-11
IESG Telechat date: 2017-12-14

Summary: This document has been significantly improved by incorporating the feedback from the specialist reviewers and by fixing the English.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: None