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Telechat Review of draft-ietf-iasa2-trust-update-00
review-ietf-iasa2-trust-update-00-opsdir-telechat-zhou-2018-09-24-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-iasa2-trust-update
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2018-10-09
Requested 2018-09-12
Authors Jari Arkko , Ted Hardie
Draft last updated 2018-09-24
Completed reviews Genart Telechat review of -00 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -00 by Tianran Zhou (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tianran Zhou
State Completed
Review review-ietf-iasa2-trust-update-00-opsdir-telechat-zhou-2018-09-24
Reviewed revision 00 (document currently at 03)
Result Has Issues
Completed 2018-09-24
review-ietf-iasa2-trust-update-00-opsdir-telechat-zhou-2018-09-24-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

Document reviewed: draft-ietf-iasa2-trust-update-00

This document is well written. I do not find any major issue from the OPS point
of view. I also read the related docuement draft-ietf-iasa2-trust-rationale-00.
I do not have strong opinion but I am curious why seperating these two
docuements.

Issues:
I think the seperation of draft-ietf-iasa2-trust-rationale-00 and
draft-ietf-iasa2-trust-update-00 makes both incomplete. I suggest to
incorporate draft-ietf-iasa2-trust-rationale-00 into
draft-ietf-iasa2-trust-update-00 as one BCP for publication. I am fine if this
is a decision from the community discussion.

Nits:
Section 2.   s/miminize/minimize/

Regards,
Tianran