Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ice-dualstack-fairness-03
review-ietf-ice-dualstack-fairness-03-genart-lc-shirazipour-2016-07-19-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-ice-dualstack-fairness |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 07) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2016-07-08 | |
| Requested | 2016-06-30 | |
| Authors | Paal-Erik Martinsen , Tirumaleswar Reddy.K , Prashanth Patil | |
| I-D last updated | 2016-07-19 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -03
by Meral Shirazipour
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Genart Last Call review of -03 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Genart Telechat review of -07 by Meral Shirazipour Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Charlie Kaufman (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -02 by Tim Chown (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-ice-dualstack-fairness-03-genart-lc-shirazipour-2016-07-19
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| Reviewed revision | 03 (document currently at 07) | |
| Result | Ready with Nits | |
| Completed | 2016-07-19 |
review-ietf-ice-dualstack-fairness-03-genart-lc-shirazipour-2016-07-19-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-ice-dualstack-fairness-03 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2016-07-05 IETF LC End Date: 2016-07-08 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as BCP RFC but I have some comments. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 2], "arguable be better"---->"arguably be better" -[Page 2], "types know"---->"types known" -[Page 8], Section 7.1 and 7.2 have the same title, is that by choice? -[Page 9], Section 10.1, first reference ([I-D.ietf-ice-rfc5245bis])to be updated to latest version. -Also on [Page 4] Reference to "section 4.1.2.1" of [I-D.ietf-ice-rfc5245bis], it would be good to list the section title too (in case the numbering changes in the final version). Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com