Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ice-dualstack-fairness-07
review-ietf-ice-dualstack-fairness-07-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2016-12-01-00

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Document: draft-ietf-ice-dualstack-fairness-07
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2016-11-26
IETF LC End Date: 2016-11-27  (1st:2016-07-08)
IESG Telechat date: NA

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Best Current Practice  RFC.

Major issues:
Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
[Page 1], "BSD License text as described in Section 4.e "
mistakenly the html version
(https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ice-dualstack-fairness-07 )points to
Section 4 of the draft (whereas it refers to BSD licensing document)

[Page 3], "Dependant on the nomination"--->"Dependent on the nomination"

Section 3 and 4 title:  "Recomendations"--->"Recommendations"

[Page 5], Section 4, formula would be clearer if the division round up rule was
specifically mentioned.

[Page 7], "Dependant of the nomination"--->"Dependent on the nomination"

Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
www.ericsson.com