Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ice-trickle-18
review-ietf-ice-trickle-18-opsdir-lc-banks-2018-04-04-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ice-trickle
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 21)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2018-02-22
Requested 2018-02-08
Authors Emil Ivov , Eric Rescorla , Justin Uberti , Peter Saint-Andre
I-D last updated 2018-04-04
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -16 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -16 by David Mandelberg (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -18 by Sarah Banks (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Sarah Banks
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-ice-trickle by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 18 (document currently at 21)
Result Ready
Completed 2018-04-04
review-ietf-ice-trickle-18-opsdir-lc-banks-2018-04-04-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

My apologies for the late review.
However, I found this document extremely well written, and clear, and concise.
Often I'll see docs that call out an issue where something isn't possible, but
don't give an example that underscores that point. This document was extremely
well rounded. Thanks for that. All in all, it was a good read, and it's ready
for publication.