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Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-add-paths-implementation-00
review-ietf-idr-add-paths-implementation-00-rtgdir-early-chen-2015-05-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-idr-add-paths-implementation
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 00)
Type Early Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2015-05-13
Requested 2015-04-27
Authors Alvaro Retana
I-D last updated 2015-05-13
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -00 by Mach Chen
Assignment Reviewer Mach Chen
State Completed
Review review-ietf-idr-add-paths-implementation-00-rtgdir-early-chen-2015-05-13
Reviewed revision 00
Result Has nits
Completed 2015-05-13
review-ietf-idr-add-paths-implementation-00-rtgdir-early-chen-2015-05-13-00
Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The
Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as
they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special
request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs.
For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see ‚Äč

http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would
be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call
comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by
updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-idr-add-paths-implementation-00.txt
Reviewer: Mach Chen
Review Date: 2015/05/07
IETF LC End Date: Not known
Intended Status: Informational

Summary:
 This document is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be
 considered prior to publication.

Comments:
 The document is well written and easy to read.

Major Issues:
 No major issues found.

Minor Issues:
 No minor issues found.

Nits:

Running idnits tool, found the following nits:
== Missing Reference: 'RFC4724' is mentioned on line 592, but not defined

Abstract and Introduction

s/The survey had 22 questions.../The survey had 20 questions...
s/The ADD-PATH implementation survey had 22 detailed questions.../ The ADD-PATH
implementation survey had 20 detailed questions

Section 3.1

"..they don't implement any advertisement of routes."

I guess you want to say they don't implement any advertisement of ADD-PATH
routes.

Best regards,
Mach